I want significance, No I need a personality.
I want a big house, No I need a place to relax.
I want a fancy car, No I need someone to walk with.
I want a library, No I need knowledge.
I want to travel and explore, No I need to take a break from routine and breathe.
I want to be popular, No I need harmony with myself.
I want to be adventurous, No I need to conquer my fears.
I want to have many friends, No I need someone who can understand.
I want someone who loves, No I need someone who holds till the end.
I want everyone to be happy, No I need to be happy.
I want to cheer people, No I need to speak truth boldly.
Our thoughts are like streaming water,
Sometimes feel like calm.
Sometimes feel like huge waves.
So why not play with our thoughts,
Sometimes like hide and seek,
Sometimes like kabaddi with water,
Sometimes like a jig-saw puzzle.
While having fun organize them,
We can swim in them,
Or we will be drowned in them.

25 responses to “Thoughts”
Great work. Simple but indepth in meaning. Enjoyed reading this rhythmic work Priyanshi🤩💓
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Thank you so much😊
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Wonderful . This is truly the maze of our thoughts. Very well written.
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Thank you so much😊
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Very nice summing up of the many conflicting thoughts within ourselves.
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Quite aptly you presented the difference between the thoughts which may seem alike!
Loved the last two lines❤❤
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You beautifully presented the difference between the musings which seem alike,at times!
Loved the last two lines!❤❤
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Thank you so much
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And thank you for the follow..😃
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This is definitely a great work ❤️
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This is beautiful!
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A beautiful message in this
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Glad,You like it and found it
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Our thoughts do stream like water, hard to grasp and understand. You’ve put truth into words, and how beautifully said.
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Thank you so much.I am glad you can relate😊
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This is just ahhmazingg Priyanshi…Lots of love:)
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Beautifully written😊😊
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Your thoughts are so simple yet fresh. Like the first monsoon shower.
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Thank you so much❤
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Beautiful piece 🙂
And the clicks accompanying your blog posts are beautiful as well.
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Thank you🙂
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