POETIC PLAY STUDIO

Priyanshi shah

Journey

It starts with a sweet approach, I know

Seems attractive personality like rare flowers in the garden, I know

Eye pleasing looks like the sunset at a beach, I know

A kind and generous character like shades of the moon, I know

Calm behavior like water in the ocean, I know

Lovely and great talks like sparkling stars, I know

Colorful mind like a rainbow in the sky, I know

Sugary thoughts like jumping monkeys on trees, I know

And it changes one day, I know

As a wild personality like a fireball, I know

As a firm looks like spots of rust on a car, I know

As an unkind character like a barren land, I know

As a heartless behavior like an insensitive to other people’s feeling, I know

As a comfortless talk like a teaspoon of salt in a tea, I know

As a severe mind like toxic chemicals, I know

As a bitter thought like a garbage, I know

But it is worth, I know

28 responses to “Journey”

  1. I think you’ve to connect with people Priyanshi.. 😊You writes wonderful but the Audience or say growth only you get if you interact with them, start follow people and read there blogs! 😀

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  12. Good day Priyanshi. It is nice to meet you for the first time. Thank you for your interest in my blog. My impression is that English is not the only language you speak but you are doing especially well and are brave to write poetry in English. English is my only language I am comfortable in and I am not able to write poetry. I liked the repetition in this poem, and it is effective. I also found it interesting how the poem changed from the beginning to the end. It made me think of a girl who has a broken heart.

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